So, here it finally is. I finished editing and this is the first draft of my film opening I completed for my coursework project. Most of it is based on my storyboards, but I have made a few changes to make the film shorter, make it easier to film and make it better to view. I plan to add a internet sourced siren sound and all the actors shown are my friends. It doesnt have any titles or music yet, because I havent decided on them yet. They will both be added in a later draft:-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46xPIAYeVYoThis is the second draft of my film. Changes that I have made are adding a soundtrack and titles to the film. However, I am unsure that my soundtrack is really suitable for the video, because I think that it may make it look more like a music video than a film opening. I will get people to look over my video and tell me if they agree with my thoughts:-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XwwvuLXz5EcI have looked over the 2nd draft of my final video, and asked others to view it. One thing alot of people said was that the attention was drawn from the video and onto the music that I used. This made me wonder if too much attention was taken from the video and onto the music. Because of this, I went onto royalty free music sites and found music tracks which I can use for my film rather than real songs. By doing this I hope to try to make my film better for the viewer, and less like a music video.
This is the third draft of my film. As you can see, I have added a new soundtrack, but I have kept the titles the same. As you saw above, after asking people if they thought I should change my soundtrack, all but two people agreed that I should, so that is what I have done. I may add another draft, with a full new scene in it, but that is undecided as of yet.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_z0Zq5CDO8